tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post553850969135445255..comments2024-03-12T13:05:07.318+05:30Comments on SADA: भीगा चेहरा ...सदाhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10937633163616873911noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-33998521525747413062009-11-18T13:26:12.574+05:302009-11-18T13:26:12.574+05:30काबिलेतारीफ बेहतरीनकाबिलेतारीफ बेहतरीनसंजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-82647520719765769042009-11-18T10:56:20.706+05:302009-11-18T10:56:20.706+05:30bahut sundar likhti hain aap...itne kam shbdon mei...bahut sundar likhti hain aap...itne kam shbdon mein bahut kah diya!Alpana Vermahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08360043006024019346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-58658200666096712662009-11-14T13:07:40.748+05:302009-11-14T13:07:40.748+05:30kuch hi shabdon mein kahi ..... gahri baat .... is...kuch hi shabdon mein kahi ..... gahri baat .... is baat ko kabhi kabhi aap zindagi mein bhi mahsoos kiya ja sakta hai ... achha likhaदिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-20409976412014892602009-11-14T09:45:31.346+05:302009-11-14T09:45:31.346+05:30नायिकाभेद में तो ये एक लक्षण प्रकार है।
डाक्साब क...नायिकाभेद में तो ये एक लक्षण प्रकार है। <br />डाक्साब को इत्तला करिए। <br /><br />अत्युत्तम रचना ।गिरिजेश राव, Girijesh Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16654262548719423445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-24657307028471851912009-11-14T08:43:00.818+05:302009-11-14T08:43:00.818+05:30Vani....di......... sahi kah rahi hain.....
:)Vani....di......... sahi kah rahi hain..... <br /><br />:)डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-46349855468879152502009-11-14T07:22:12.460+05:302009-11-14T07:22:12.460+05:30इतना प्यारा चेहरा आंसुओं से भीगा हमें मंजूर नहीं ....इतना प्यारा चेहरा आंसुओं से भीगा हमें मंजूर नहीं ...<br />सिर्फ और सिर्फ मुस्कुराएँ ...!!वाणी गीतhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01846470925557893834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-23804987191646279222009-11-13T22:25:47.840+05:302009-11-13T22:25:47.840+05:30बहुत उम्दा भाव उकेरे..वाह!बहुत उम्दा भाव उकेरे..वाह!Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-40634145652666995592009-11-13T18:30:21.158+05:302009-11-13T18:30:21.158+05:30अच्छी लगी कविता !अच्छी लगी कविता !अभिषेक आर्जवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12169006209532181466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-23469505001252455392009-11-13T18:23:11.100+05:302009-11-13T18:23:11.100+05:30शायद एक कारण
यह भी बन जाता होगा
रोना चाहो
और न र...शायद एक कारण <br />यह भी बन जाता होगा<br />रोना चाहो <br />और न रो पाने काM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-83339279600186723272009-11-13T17:11:59.437+05:302009-11-13T17:11:59.437+05:30कौन है जो आंसू दे रहा हैकौन है जो आंसू दे रहा हैअजय कुमारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15547441026727356931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-49813560816807275232009-11-13T16:19:38.503+05:302009-11-13T16:19:38.503+05:30anubhaw se bhingee rachanaa ...........atisundaranubhaw se bhingee rachanaa ...........atisundarओम आर्यhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05608555899968867999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-46185134368943209592009-11-13T15:49:00.300+05:302009-11-13T15:49:00.300+05:30अनुभव को शेर मे बढ़िया ढंग से पिरोया है!अनुभव को शेर मे बढ़िया ढंग से पिरोया है!डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09313147050002054907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-42731175001569771982009-11-13T12:22:10.616+05:302009-11-13T12:22:10.616+05:30bahut hi badiya
do check out
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W...bahut hi badiya<br /> do check out<br />www.simplypoet.com<br />World's first multi- lingual poetry portal!!<br /><br />aapke bahut sarre future fans aapki kavitayein padne ka intezaar kar rahein hai ..do login and post.Toon Indianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07675962505129911588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-51621170663112022222009-11-13T11:47:21.254+05:302009-11-13T11:47:21.254+05:30पर कारण जरूर बन जाते हो
कभी देर से आने पर
कभी बि...पर कारण जरूर बन जाते हो<br /><br />कभी देर से आने पर<br /><br />कभी बिना कुछ कहे <br /><br />चले जाने पर<br /><br />कभी कभी हंस के मनाने पर ।<br /><br />Bahut khoob, behtareen !पी.सी.गोदियाल "परचेत"https://www.blogger.com/profile/15753852775337097760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-88554942923421977962009-11-13T11:36:42.872+05:302009-11-13T11:36:42.872+05:30सुन्दर लिखा है आपने इस भाव कोसुन्दर लिखा है आपने इस भाव कोरंजू भाटियाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07700299203001955054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-55977471800049542162009-11-13T11:19:54.594+05:302009-11-13T11:19:54.594+05:30बहुत ही कम शब्दों में बहुत अच्छी अभिव्यक्ति, बधाई ...बहुत ही कम शब्दों में बहुत अच्छी अभिव्यक्ति, बधाई !!!Kusum Thakurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02345756853367472461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974912086413824889.post-51932684522964468142009-11-13T11:09:27.937+05:302009-11-13T11:09:27.937+05:30Oh! bilkul sahi baat aur sateek abhivykati...........Oh! bilkul sahi baat aur sateek abhivykati......... bilkul aisa hi hota hai..... hamare saath kai baar.,......... kai baar hi nahi........hamesha.... aisa hi hota hai...<br /><br />पर कारण जरूर बन जाते हो..... yeh line bahut sateek rahi....<br /><br />bahut achchi lagi yeh kavita.....डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.com